11.25.2007

dovely

fair weather friends with hopes of
plans in lands far away.

life, love and the pursuit of loneliness
etched into my mind.

tainted shards of happiness in my past;
broken pieces of happiness in my hands.

and now?
i can see the sun from anywhere.

4 comments:

Laura said...

wow, so familiar and so close to home

Andrew said...

So incredibly good.

That last line...

I'm really glad we got to discuss this.

justin said...

I too really like the last line. It reminds me of a line I made up to use in some non-existant movie.

We haven't had any very deep conversations in a long time.

Lisa said...

Tim, GREAT poem...

I, along with everyone else it seems, espcially like the last 2 lines. I also love the image of you holding happiness in your hands...so good.